The Leak

The Leak

A Story by Ms Paragon

She entered the house and dropped her bag on the floor, on a pile of unpaid bills and unopened letters. She crossed the small hallway and slowly made her way to the living room. She put on the side some clothes cluttering the sofa and let out a sigh as she squeezed herself in the small space she had created. She closed her eyes and tried to ignore the stench peering through her nostrils. Maybe it was about time she picked up and threw away the pizza boxes stacking up on the floor. Or maybe she could do it later. All she wanted right now was to just close her eyes and make everything disappear.

 The sound of water running in the toilet kept nagging on her ears. Drop after drop at fist, more like a waterfall now. She was sure to drown in her sleep if the leak in the flush kept on like that. She smiled at the prospect and made her way to the kitchen. She went through the unwashed dishes in the sink, picked up a mug and made herself some coffee.

 She kept the mug, warm between her hands, and stood in front of the window. Her mother had called earlier. She said she was worried about her, she was going to come see her. It's been a while since her mother came to visit. It was before that man had attacked her. When the clothes had been  lined up in her wardrobe, the dishes washed, the floor cleaned and the house had smelled of lemons and freshly cooked meals. When she would have called the plumber to fix the leak.

© 2018 Ms Paragon


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A sad story shared Ms Paragon. It is terrible we become afraid. Lock the door and hide. Thank you for sharing the powerful story. True for many.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and your kind words. I appreciate it!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Ms Paragon.
Really good read, that makes you want to find out what is going on. Never a dull moment, Intriguing, interesting and thought-provoking all rolled into one epic short story.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your beautiful review! I appreciate it!
a good read...keep writing! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Wow Ms. Paragon, you are amazingly adept at creating these powerful vignettes, another compelling little write, and an even more compelling read... N

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!I appreciate your kind words!
Neville

6 Years Ago

my pleasure entirely..N
What a sad picture you paint. A woman falls into a deep depression after being attacked and can barely function. I want to read the next chapter....hopeful that when her mother visits, she finds a reason to see the sun. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


I think this is so truly reflective of depression and dissociation. The lack of caring about your surroundings.
It leaves me wanting to know more.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment!II appreciate it!

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