Perfection

Perfection

A Story by Ms Paragon

She woke up in a room bathed in the morning sunlight. She inhaled deeply, walked to the window and drew the curtains. What a treat! Finally, sunlight, after weeks of heavy rain. She could even hear birds singing in the distance.

 She closed her eyes to soak in the warmth of the morning sun, and the aroma of freshly brewed coffee hit her. She followed the smell to the kitchen, and there it was. The most important person in her life, standing there, with pots and pans around him, eyes laughing, freshly squeezed orange juice at hand.

 She closed her eyes again. This time to soak in the perfection of this moment. Yesterday didn't exist anymore, tomorrow was far away. The only thing she had was now. This perfect fragment of time. Fleeting, yet forever hers.

 And she could feel the light. This time it radiated from within her soul.

© 2018 Ms Paragon


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Beautiful and true places and thoughts shared my friend.
"She closed her eyes again. This time to soak in the perfection of this moment. Yesterday didn't exist anymore, tomorrow was far away. The only thing she had was now. This perfect fragment of time. Fleeting, yet forever hers"
The above lines. perfect place to know. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging review!II really appreciate it!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Now is the most important. What we do today is important and you are welcome my friend.



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Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece of writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it!Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!I appreciate it!
Like a perfect photography in time. Captured spectacularly with heartfelt words and pure simply love emotions. Well Done. Truly enjoyed reading your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your beautiful words!I appreciate it!I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Life is a series of moments.there is no yesterday or future.there's only now.what you wrote reminds me to appreciate the moment right now

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it!Thank you for reading!
Your style of writing is exceptionally pleasant! Not many details, only the important ones!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review!I appreciate it!
You've taken time captive with these few words, causing it to pause long enough to snap it's photo. This is a lovely little piece, so well written and captivating throughout. Nice work, indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

What a lovely review!Thank you you so much for your encouraging words.I appreciate it!I'm glad you e.. read more
I agree Ms Paragon.
" And she could feel the light. This time it radiated from within her soul. "
Live for today, tomorrow is not here and yesterday is written. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts. I enjoyed them.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Ms Paragon.
Beautiful and true places and thoughts shared my friend.
"She closed her eyes again. This time to soak in the perfection of this moment. Yesterday didn't exist anymore, tomorrow was far away. The only thing she had was now. This perfect fragment of time. Fleeting, yet forever hers"
The above lines. perfect place to know. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your encouraging review!II really appreciate it!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Now is the most important. What we do today is important and you are welcome my friend.
Beautiful....love painted in few words... :)
The eyes smiling... that says it all....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your beautiful words!I appreciate it!
The care and love of someone you love makes moments perfect!
You painted a perfect moment with your wonderful words .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review!I'm glad you liked it!

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Added on May 5, 2018
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