Boxed In

Boxed In

A Story by Ms Paragon

She was trembling with fear.  She could feel her heart racing in her chest, her knees weak with hunger.

 She had been locked up in this horrid apartment for how many days now?  She felt her breath quicken as the events of the recent past came back to haunt her.  The meeting at the bar, the charming stranger, the one night stand.  So unlike her.  And then again, he was easy going and she had been feeling so lonely lately. Some human contact was welcome. Any human contact really.

 And, now, this.  He had shown his true colours  as soon as they entered his place.  The sex had been forced and painful.  She was tossed around as a soulless doll, at least that's how she felt.  And when morning came, before his departure, she was told, in no uncertain terms, to stay put or else...

  So, that's what she did, living in fear and hunger ever since.  The cupboards were empty, no sight of food around, her belly filled with nothing but water.  She could feel bile coming up her throat and rushed to the bathroom.  She came back out, unstable, filthy.  She had all that she could take.  She had to fight , if  it was the last thing she did.  Fight with all she had left in her, claw herself out  if it came to it.  She rushed to the door, began banging on it, kicking it, screaming at everyone, at anyone, at no one, for all she knew.  She yelled and yelled until she could yell no more, bruises in her knuckles and feet, drained and helpless.

 And then she reached for the  knob and turned it.  And the door opened.

 It was never locked to begin with.

© 2018 Ms Paragon


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Clearly, you have a gift. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!I appreciate it!
Anguish can lock many doors. You have fleshed out a powerful story here. I am glad to have read this. Thanks for posting this

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!TThat's exactly the point I was trying to make!I'm glad you enjoyed it!
You write very captivating stories. I tend to think of scenes, so these resonate with, and inspire, me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment!I appreciate it!
You have written a amazing story. Made the reader believe a prison and the door wasn't locked. Thank you Ms Paragon for sharing the amazing tale.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for the thoughtful review!I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did. A surprise ending and you are welcome Ms Paragon.
HOLY COW!!! This is amazing. What a good, but interesting ending. I'd like to see more stories with this type of endings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you!I'm glad you liked it!
Lost_Soul

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
I have absolutely no idea how old you might be Ms Paragon and it matters not but this is certainly your forte...... short punchy stories I mean...........................Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!I appreciate the encouraging review!I enjoy writing short stories and I am glad yo.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

tis very true....and my pleasure......
Wow! Another great ending! Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!I am glad you enjoyed it!
A horrific suspenseful story about abuse yet ends on a most surprising unexpected note. U wrote it perfectly. Kudos.


I'm quite a newbie here, Pleez do review, write your thoughts under my newest poem too. Luv making friends and am used to exchange of comments.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it! Thank you for your time to read and comment! I'll go over and read your poem.. read more

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