P.S. I Heart You

With every breath.

Every seemingly effortless movement

of myself,

I concentrate.

I meditate.

Use the forces of my mind

to say those words,

"I Heartchew"

 

Together now, we are not.

In dreams ... maybe.

Reality tells me that I am alone.

A text message away,

but still ... away.

 

Bring me closer,

hold me tight.

Please.

Don't let me go,

ever.

 

Because within that millisecond

when your hand leaves mine,

your touch vanishes,

I am, again,

away.

And we are, again,

alone.

Reviews

[Mark Pearce]

I like the phonetic approach --

"I Heartchew"

It adds a bit of seasoning to the tone of the piece.

[dorkfish]

its a nice poem, well writen but sadly bitter sweet ya know.. but very nice

[Orlando Murcia]

Very intersesting I love your poem sweetie

[Brandon]

Nicely written. good job.

[Dead Angel]

so heart felt and loving! i can sort of relate to this, how being away from someone you love and how hard it is. well done writing this, every emotion was dead on. great job! :)

[Steven Silvey]

Cool beans.
"I Heartchew" Cool word.