The Unicorn's Ride

The Unicorn's Ride

A Poem by Ms. MoneyPenny

Over the rainbow

A unicorn flew,

He was sent to find me

he said by you

"climb aboard," he whispered

"We must go ...."

and into a protal of light

we flew

the sky  so blue

the fields so green

with each explosion of ight

was a wonderful scene

so happy we seem

and always togehter

there was no end to your dream

The the unicorn said

"I have one more surprise..."

so we took off quickly

and pierced the sky

there you were sleeping

 dreaming in your bed

and as I kissed your head

the unicorn interrupted

"I must now get you home

but now that you've seen his dream

may you never feel alone"

my heart felt heavy

a fire burned inside

thank you so much my love

for this unicorn's ride

© 2008 Ms. MoneyPenny


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A very lovely fantasy Ms. Penny. Dreams are indeed visual apparitions of hopes and wishes come true. You seem to be a splendid visionary and writer of dreams and love poetry. Practice your spelling skills a little more closely, and you will go far. I'm a long way from perfect, but if you need a coach, I am happy to help.
Love...Liz

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Ms. MoneyPenny
Ms. MoneyPenny

Richmond, VA



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After a long layoff and a brief moment of insanity, I am back! This time away has shown me that writing is what has gotten me by through these tough economic times. I hope to gain momentum in the w.. more..

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