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Novelty

Novelty

A Poem by Niecee
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umm im diffrent and where i live its like everybody follows trends and stuff, but a consequence is that i felt like i was becoming a fashion acessory .. so this is that

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i cant afford to be another guys pair of custom j's/  for u to like me only cuz im diffrent cuz ur setting me and u up for disapointment on my same old same old days

i dont want to be anyone elses new toy / cuz eventually if u like me only cuz of the way i talk that same speech in 2 monthes will begin to annoy

u see i can be that down to earth rock nothin but stelletos and converse chick/ been the girl they like to show off to the block in that lime green crown vic/ last dude said i was a black girl with white chick benifits

 but i dont want to be novelty no more/ cuz novelty lacks longevity thats for sure

and im not condemining all the things about me u embrace/ im just sayin i need my craziness to take a second place/i need u to like me for who i am naked no make up on my face

 and inside higher places than the one between my thighs/ need u to know who i am minus the disguise

 cuz eventually my wierd will become old like fashions do if u dont know why i am that way/ i wanna be timeless to ya if thats okay

 my black polish and skulls my neon pink rings they wont last when ur mad theyre just material things

 u gotta know my soul gotta know my heart/ i need to transend with deeper meaning than highway pop art/- poptarts latest flavor is great but im sure u'd go to Ihop if u had time to wait

so you see i need to know if u want me for the right reasons /cuz im a lady for all seasons

but i dont wanna be the solution to ur boredum dont wanna be another somethin new / just wanna feel like i dont belong with anyone else but u

 so that after the hype disapaits, your intrest dont evacuate /so just wait

 i need you to figure exactly what u expect from me,/ not knowing is homicide , its flat out deadly .

 i cant promise ill keep comin with new s**t like Wayne/ cuz im more like Luther, Tupac and Nirvana  so if youll be my Superman i'll be ur Louis Lane with my Hot Topic mary janes

 all i can give u cant be untied unzipped or unbuttoned its somethin inside of me / an equal exchange only possible removal is surgically

 i have somethin that after the new car smell is gone u still gonna wanna ride /like memories of a perfect day at the fair long after the gold fish died /, my love is like wo and i aint never lied

so save me the heartbreak and leaveme at the double take if aint willing to dig deeper / the next guy will and its finders keepers , loosers weepers 

© 2008 Niecee


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thanks

Posted 16 Years Ago


i couldn't get past the text shortened spelling and misspelling and some really bad rhymes to find out what you were trying to say. granted, i'm no doubt way outside the demographics of who you expect to read your stuff, but if you want to be understood beyond your age or cultural group you have to be a better writer technically. if that's not your goal, forget i said anything. good luck.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on September 12, 2008

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Niecee
Niecee

dallas, TX



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A Poem by Niecee