The art of Confession

Confession is an art to admit the follies in ones life , a direction to vent out the inner feel to unburden the soul.

I saw a man walking on the road

Talking to oneself  leaning near a stall ,

 Oh! lost though  he felt from outside

 It felt there goes a tumult inside

He stops and looks around

But waywardly again continues to look.

To regain again his new world's look.

It feels he needs an assistance somewhere

To unlock the mystery of his long said tales

O! he does, find a fellow as such

 A warm demeanor with a cool  refreshing smile 

Who took the plodder close by his side.

Now this man confident to utter

Spoke to him as to feel more better.

He said" this is my confession that I make

No more mushrooming advises now do I take

The bargains  made now do not bother

 As I am here to recount and counter

The acts done of which I  can confess

The list is endless,  from bottom to the index .

No stalking shall I bear as of now

The ghostly air  has now turned down

I here stand toady on a strong ground

To confess my doings

To make peace with  all my being on a sturdy ground.

I here prove my stance more clear

With a motive to dig no more pains to bear.

Let me  feel  lighter  by now

Let me live  life  on a brighter ground.

 

Reviews

[Chris]

The hardest part using another's words is that they limit yours. I seriously wonder where you would have taken this piece your way vs the other person's way.

[Wicahpi]

Tis true about the art of confession. Thank you for entering the 10 Words I Give contest! I enjoy reading your entry. Good Luck!!

[Anushka joshi]

Always my Inspiration Ma'am .... I love your writings .
Poem is really having a deep meaning , and somewhat relatable .....

[msharma]

Wrote for a contest using tags. Kindly review.