Alcohol

Anger poored out on a poem since all I have to talk to is my friend Jake.

He loves it,

and can't get enought

it's what gets him through the day.

He'll walk up to you wanting to

take everything you have.

Got a baby on the way

"hey lets go screw around

with more girls."

He got messed up and

hopped in a car,

with Myles.

 

Bye Bye Myles. 

 

Author's Note

Okay so, I would really like reviews on this. It means a lot to me. please.

Reviews

[Cidney009]

So to me i feel like i can relate. I knew this guy he had everything and anything with this one girl. he messed it up for alcohol. he didnt know how to handle himself. I like reading things i can relate to!

[Katrina Saaresto]

This poem is very...straight to the point and the feeling of anger is well expressed in your words. I could feel that anger slide across the lines without stop until the last one last where you say "Bye Bye Myles.".
Poetry has always been a great way to let out all of those outstanding emotions in ourselves.
-KS

[U N I C O R N S AND Z E B R A S]

Im so angry at this Nate person who killed Myles...AND he's still alive :'(