Love Lost & Found

Flowers blooming, birds chirping

I found my place in you.

People dancing as nations are singing

I found my prince in you.

Fate finds its way, so love fades away

Like being tainted in a stormy light.

Four seasons have swept in a dark silent night,

Then came a daylight life.

Colors illuminating, the gardens of aisle

As butterflies fluttering the buds.

Stars spreading, crystals shining

Destiny presented its daylight plot.

 

Reviews

[Lindsay T]

This is a really beautiful poem. You describe everything really well, I get a sense of the imagery you're portraying, and you paint a clear picture in the reader's head. One suggestion: I might edit the last two lines. "Stars spreading, crystals shining / Destiny presented its daylight plot" is BEAUTIFUL, but it doesn't really seem like the ending of a poem you know? Maybe add two more lines and try to conclude it a bit more. But still, it's amazing! Nice work!!