The Shadow in Dreams

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Weary and dread, entering a misty garden of roses, a bright light came out of nowhere.

Nearer to its direction, a shadow of past felt like holding tight at present time.

Embracing and calling, wanting and needing, seemed like the impossibilities.

Tears flowed out like river, sadness burst hard like volcano, then realization burnt out the mind.

Presence of how life should be is different of what is meant to be.

Finally awakened, everything was just but a dream.

Reviews

[Lindsay T]

Gorgeous imagery! Would love to read more. Try to express yourself a little more- remember, you want to get your point across to all your readers. Nice start though!!! :)

[Brooklyn]

good write. keep up the good work