feeling blue

feeling blue

don't know what to do

feeling empty like a vase without flowers;

except, the pain is deeper and has more power

it's taking over my life and I don't even have a say

the pain is getting worse and worse every day 

I don't feel like doing much anymore

and I don't see an open door;

to guide and lead me away from all this pain

I'm falling down;

and the worst thing about it is;

there's no one to cry to

and express everything I've felt and said in this poem

Reviews

[Black Jess]

Short and Beautiful !
in a few words you said it all and you were able to leave that pain between the lines so that every reader can feel it
I like this expression " feeling empty like a vase without flowers "

[Leo]

Genuine and heart felt..I'm willing to wager you felt good after venting your emotion through words..
check out soul flu or entrenchment..

[Stacy Purvis]

Your words are always so insightful, full of emotion....raw, human emotion. That's what makes you such a great writer: your ability to be REAL. Thank you for sharing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Anastasia!!!

[Stacy Purvis]

You're welcome! I miss you, my friend!!!

[Priyanshi]

Sometimes, some situations pushes us in the pit of the worst pain and we don't even know what to do right at the moment, and no one there stays with us at that time to take an advice from.your poem truly states this.
Just keep on smiling:)

[Mr.Writer]

Very true indeed! Thank you Priyanshi! :))

[49k_jdys]

This is so lonely, I love it. It's also very relatable and emulates true human emotion. Well done!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :)