![]() Out of control (poem)A Poem by Mr.Writer![]() Okay... this is an attempt at spoken word poetry, hope it's good!![]()
No one's perfect
But this young man, didn't understand that He was desperate for love and friendship and wanted to be wanted by others up to the point where he changed his personality clothes and made himself into something he wasn't even comfortable being, just for the sake of others Everywhere he went, he looked around consciously at himself to make sure he didn't look like a fool in front of others and used a mirror every five minutes to check his hair After talking to others, he replayed every word he said in his head to make sure he didn't mess up or accidentally hurt someones feelings and this is what tore him apart all these thoughts and feelings... he just couldn't handle them anymore it got out of his control and out of his reach, and made him weaker and weaker being perfect was harder than he had ever thought because, no one is perfect tears shed down his ballistic eyes, but no one cared to notice his heavy heart shattered into thousands of pieces at this point, he didn't even care what people thought about him he just wanted to disappear, and that was his last and final wish
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14 Reviews Added on August 19, 2017 Last Updated on August 21, 2017 Author![]() Mr.WriterToronto, Ontario, CanadaAboutFirst of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..Writing
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