The house where I never feel at home in (poem)

This is dark and deep...

I'm scared

I'm helpless

I need someone by my side,

so they can listen to me

and hear all about the fights and taunts

I witness almost everyday in my house;

the house where I never feel at home in

How my parents voices raise;

raise higher than the waves of

the ocean

and I want it to stop

so we all can live 

peacefully 

But, it never does

no matter how far I run away

the voices always reach to me

and drag me down with them

I still try and try to be happy

but deep down inside, I'm shattered, 

lost and afraid

Reviews

[Hope]

You so easily pour out the emotions through your poems...
You will be okay and you will find the peace you are looking for...
Thank you for sharing this:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Neetha! :)

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Mr Writer, this is a very honest and brave write.
There is nothing wrong with shattered such people do extraordinary things broken and still breathing everyday. Your desire to want something bigger from life shines threw in this courageous write.

Sheer Terror

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Sheer!! :)
I agree with you, there is nothing wrong with them, they just need some time, while pouring it out on paper

[golden]

There's a home out there for everyone I like to think.. I'm still searching :)

[Mr.Writer]

I agree :)
Thank you Golden! :)

[Jessica Lima]

I think we all hv a place we do not fit in. Very relatable!

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, I agree!
Thank you Jessica! :))

[HeyJadeXO]

As difficult as it may seem you will make it out. Keep using writing as an outlet you are great at it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Jade!! :)

[Priyanshi]

Really a deep write..but one day, everything will be fine...peace will be discovered..overall a great poem and heart touching too.

[Mr.Writer]

I really hope so!
Thank you Priyanshi! :))

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.

[Farhan Shaikh]

One day everything will make sense..there are many who are shattered inside..but we need to remember that we are important..
We are getting stronger with each scar..
U have to be trained to be on the top of the world..and training gives pain..

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, we get stronger and stronger with each sorrow
Thank you Farhan :)

[z.chéri]

Very heart touching for me. Good job.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Melody! :)

[Gwenn the little girl]

Yes, sadly, it is true for some of us. The very house that we live upon may be the place we want to escape the most, and no matter where and how we fast we run away, the pain always haunts us.

Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, it'll always hurt us...
Thank you Gwenn!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The days of youth. Locked doors needed to be opened. The thoughts hard and direct. Powerful description left a lot for the reader to grasp. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.