My scarred heart

I have pen and a paper

and a scarred heart

in that heart

there are still feelings

memories, that led to it's scarring

also to which I don't want to remember

and I'm trying to pour them out

onto this blank paper of mine

surprisingly 

nothing comes out

I try again and still

can't write a word

as I'm too scared

of people's reactions

and to what they'll say about the words

coming from my scarred heart

Reviews

[Hope]

We often find ourselves in the situation you depicted above. Wanna say something, but can't bring out a word. And that hurts seriously. Hope your scarred heart heels fast:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Neetha! :)

[Stacy Purvis]

This is beautiful and emotional...raw, real. I love it! Keep sharing!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Anastasia! :)

[heartspeaks]

I am so happy to read this work....cause couldn't be active these days and I really missed writers care.... So ... as the poem is concerned great title...ofcourse not rhyming but who cares . Poetry doesn't have to always rhyme....its really beautiful..its neither too short not too long...its perfect. Strong emotion and the best part....it is so relatable to everyone...as all are writers here... Keep it up Shaan. Great work

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Heart!! :)
It's rlly appreciated!

[Sam]

O wow! I really liked your poem. It conveyed a lot of emotion, and meaning. The rhythm, and flow was also really good. I definitely enjoyed reading this!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Sam! :)

[golden]

Yes! How true this is. How writing can spill out this side of you that is so tender, so vulnerable you want to hide it! But this is the most beautiful part about it. Thank you for sharing

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Amber]

I completely understand where you are coming from, I too use to be afraid of what other's might say about my writing, but we can's let others hold us back. We can and must write!

[Mr.Writer]

Yes, we can't let others hold us back!
Thank you Amber :)

[Ardra]

you should not bother about others...just write what comes to you ... and let the words flow :)
the reason we write is not because we feel we are very well versed with poetry..its because we feel
we cant take it any more and we want it to express it some how ... so writing helps... then why think so much...

[Mr.Writer]

I agree with you so much!
It's better to pour out our hearts instead of thinking about others comments
Thank you!! :)

[Priyanshi]

Don't be scared about those words...
a beautiful poem you wrote.
Keep on writing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Priyanshi! :))

[Davidgeo]

Anyone who joins Silente and his little SJW bully clan will get the same treatment. You will get the same treatment.

[Kesha]

I really hate this feeling.. I'm sure we all know it too well, a relatable piece, wonderfully constructed

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, I agree with you! I think we know it too well
Thank you Kesha! :)

[Davidgeo]

Anyone who joins Silente and his little SJW bully clan will get the same treatment. You will get the same treatment.

[Kesha]

Yes we do, Shaan just block this guy, he is insane

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, I blocked him lol he's rlly weird and annoying

[Kesha]

Lol yeah he is