But when?

But when...?

I need a hope

a reason

to live in this world

I need someone

to hold my hand and tell me

it's going to alright

Someone who could love me;

all life and never

leave me alone

Celebrate every moment

of happiness we get

and cherish it to our fullest

Twirling me around 

on the dance floor

and picking me up when I fall

Doing the simplest things with me

like talking walks around the park

or going shopping with me

Having beautiful children

and deciding on names

for them , together

And at the end of the day

being with me again as we say

how much we appreciate each other

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

it could be..''it's going to be alright''

and instead of a someone that could love me..it could be,''someone who could love me all life and never leave me alone''.
so these were two sort of sentences i found...overall the poem is amazing..such beautiful imagery..keep writing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Wajiha for the feedback and review! :)

[sonnie ibadah]

Clear yet deep, well expressed.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sonnie! :)

[heartspeaks]

A dream is a wish your heart makes... This truly explained it. So sweet and made me smile. It was a good write and it was a feel write. Hope you find that someone. Good luck

[Mr.Writer]

I agree with you!
Thank you so much Heart :)

[heartspeaks]

you're welcome

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

This was a very clear poem. A real dream from the heart of one wrote it. Good poem. A real keeper. Do some more.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Joanna! :)
I will do more

[Hope]

A special someone can be the solution to all our problems.
You expressed it well through this.
Good work Mr.Writer!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Neetha! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Now you're thanking the right person. 😄

[Mr.Writer]

Hahah true :P

[Wajiha Nayeem]

lol yes...

[Najam Us Saher]

So deep. I really liked it. I felt like you expressed my feelings.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Carol Cashes]

This reads like a "prayer". Humans are wired to yearn for other humans and especially one that seems meant for us alone. You captured this in eloquent and literary style...something that seems to elude me these trying days...
A "prayer" for this Sunday morning, and I thank you.

[Mr.Writer]

That's a really nice way to see this poem! Even I didn't realize that tbh.
Thank you so much and no problem Carol! :)