Holding our hands to hope

Holding our hands to hope

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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Holding hope

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  Breathing in and out heavily
  every single one of us
  hold our hands to hope

  As we bring new memories in
  and throw the old ones out
  to the trash icon in our heads

  Make our way through wild rains
  that were created by our own kind;
  and hope to see a rainbow at the end

  We keep our belief strong;
  that together, we all can cope
  with the tough times that passed by

  Things'll be different this time
  all of us know it and can do anything
  to make a real change in our lives

  and we can start, by holding our hands to hope

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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Oh wow, truth and wisdom hides behind those words, Mr. Writer. Hope...something that keeps us alive in this world when nothing is going our way. Very beautiful and wise. Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good job, deep poem and yeah will really hold on t hope..
Powerful poem with meaningful stanzas..
I really loved the way you wrote it and the poem is outstanding

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild rains can not stop me from holding the hand of... This gave me hope while reading, and nudged my mind in a direction away from trash icons, hopefully... Very nicely penned, Sir Writer

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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