Holding our hands to hope

Holding our hands to hope

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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Holding hope

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  Breathing in and out heavily
  every single one of us
  hold our hands to hope

  As we bring new memories in
  and throw the old ones out
  to the trash icon in our heads

  Make our way through wild rains
  that were created by our own kind;
  and hope to see a rainbow at the end

  We keep our belief strong;
  that together, we all can cope
  with the tough times that passed by

  Things'll be different this time
  all of us know it and can do anything
  to make a real change in our lives

  and we can start, by holding our hands to hope

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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Hopeful and kind words led to positive ending. If people gather and learn to understand each other. Would be a better world. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes I agree with this!
You write with elegance and experience!
Thanks for sharing this!:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love reading poems,like this one...good read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderfully penned...keep writing..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now that was a really good topic...wonderfully written..with nice statements...liked it a lot :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, you are right, holding our hands to hope can lead us to the right path.
I loved the poem and the way you portrayed it.
Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you so much guys for the review and comments!!
I really appreciate it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


hope is all we have...I liked it shaan...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heart warming poem. I really liked it a lot. This poem really sends positive vibes and ray of hope to the readers.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice poem. Touching and warming. You really can be poetic...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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