I see you in them (Poem)

I see you in them (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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Shooting stars...

"
Dawn approaches
the sky darker than ever
and then they come...

Thousands of stars resting
illuminating the night sky
as they appear

I see you in them
smiling at me
from miles away

I make a wish
as you change
into a shooting star

Showing yourself
through it's image
lapping the sky

Going further away
to the universe
meeting other stars

Fading away to dawn
leaving me to wait for you;
once again

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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This is a lovely piece. There's very much more to the last line than it seems...how hard can it be...waiting for a loved one to return. Wonderful poem. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

I agree Zoe
Thank you!! :)
Zoya

7 Years Ago

No problem
I loved the imagery. Thank you for sharing this write. You have very well managed to write about stars and about your passion.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Najam!! :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.☺
quite good keep writing!! i appreciate


Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Prashant! :)
This was so great! I loved it..it's truly amazing and fascinating..the lines were short and very well written..that's what I liked the most..thanx for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sofia! :)
I really appreciate it
Sofia

7 Years Ago

Most welcome :)
Now that was very touching. How did you come up with that? It sounded very deep.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Joanna!! :)
I came up with it while walking home last night, as I saw the stars and.. read more
Joanna Matilda Barlow

7 Years Ago

Awww! That's sweet. I would bet that she's smiling over it as we know it. She'd be tearing up for jo.. read more
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thanks!!
I'm also sure she'd me smiling :)
You are such a creative poet Shaan:)
I absolutely adore your poems.
I loved the imagery you create.
Keep writing and sharing!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Neetha!! :)
I'm really glad you enjoy reading my poems! :)
It's really appre.. read more
Hope

7 Years Ago

Always a pleasure:)

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Added on July 3, 2017
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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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