I see you in them (Poem)

Dawn approaches

the sky darker than ever

and then they come...

Thousands of stars resting

illuminating the night sky

as they appear

I see you in them

smiling at me

from miles away

I make a wish

as you change

into a shooting star

Showing yourself

through it's image

lapping the sky

Going further away

to the universe

meeting other stars

Fading away to dawn

leaving me to wait for you;

once again

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I wished on a few stars in my lifetime.
"Fading away to dawn
leaving me to wait for you;
once again"
I liked the above lines. A realistic ending for us sometimes. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[HeyJadeXO]

Relating something as special as a shooting star to someone else is great comparison. I enjoyed this great job

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Jade! :))

[Saumya]

It is said that the dear ones whom we lose forever are the beautiful souls chosen by the God, to illuminate and adorn the heavenly blue carpet, skies, and glimmer like pearls :)

Skies also are a symbol of hope, so when these stars glimmer, they give us the hope that though the ones we loved aren't with us in person, but they are beautifully peaceful in the dark night sky, shining, smiling, and giving us the hope that they are OK :)

I've always been the one who've loved watching morning and night sky, the stars, and moon for hours, and Indeed could relate with your words, when you lose someone, the stars glimmer, and make us feel that the person is OK, wherever they are! Nature and the night skies, those shooting skies are incredibly...I love how they make us smile in surprise 😊

Thankyou for writing and sharing your piece here!

-Saumya

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Saumya for the review and wonderful insight on this topic! :)
I agree with you, they indeed are the chosen ones

[Saumya]

You're welcome! 😊

[apennylate]

Once again, bland waiting awaits those who make wishes on ethereal shooting "stars"... Hauntingly penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Silente! :)

[apennylate]

Of course...!

[Surya]

Haha...You described in a very beautiful way...I loved it...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya!! :)

[zaisham9393]

Beautifully written !!Love it :)!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Zaisham! :)

[Priyanshi]

Deep and even a cute poem... really enjoyed it.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Priyanshi! :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Farhan Shaikh]

So deep and amazing..good use of words..while i was reading this i spelled 'woww'.
Very good job buddy

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Farhan! :)

[Caroline]

i love how deep this poem is!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Caroline! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is a really beautiful write....such deep emotions....great work.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Wajiha! :)