Dreams... (Poem)

As night gracefully approaches

so does something special

Purely made from my head

 imaginary, yet so real

It's vivid images embracing me 

taking me somewhere I want to be

All the desires I have, being fulfilled

due to what we call, dreams

As they take us away from reality

and clean our souls and minds

Make us feel wanted 

and considered

And fade away as we wake

to the glorifying sunset

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

indeed! dreams are special...sometimes i even consider it as a message coming from another dimension.

[Mr.Writer]

I agree! They're really special, and who knows, they could be from another dimension!
Thank you L.C! :)

[L.C. Jarrette]

you're very welcome...

[Weeping willow]

Really beautiful write,loved it. Makes me wish I could dream or at least remember them,as I awake;-]

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much :)

[heartspeaks]

Beautiful work... Dreams are something of our own.. a part thats just ours. Beautifully explained... loved it..
Can't decide a particular line that is good . Great write

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Heart! :)

[heartspeaks]

my pleasure....your work always inspires me...

[Karmee]

As they take away from our reality, I so love that line, cause it is so very true. Awesome writing here.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much :)

[Damien Ridge]

Some of my most cherished memories are actually within dreams ha, as odd as that sounds. I look forward to sleeping because of dreams, though some are not so pleasant, heh. Thanks for sharing, it was a good poem!

[Mr.Writer]

Haha, I agree, dreams lead us to new places, well sometimes... :D
Thank you so much! :)

[Prashant Bajpai]

You very welled framed the tittle of the poem in the line

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Prashant! :)

[apennylate]

This had an edge of maturity and realness to it that I had not seen in your work up to this point... Raw stuff, and definitely starting to develop into a very unique style... Both engagingly deep, and touches the surface of simplicity enough to reel one in on a surface level... Keep at it... Vividly penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Silente!
I really appreciate it :)

[apennylate]

No problem, my pleasure

[Hope]

A dreamy write Shaan!!
I am a dreamer and I enjoyed this thouroughly.
Well I had the same doubt as Emipoemi!
You are a really talented writer shaan:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Neetha!

[zaisham9393]

Loved it1 Thank you for sharing :)!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you and Np! :)

[Priyanshi]

A lovely write, and beautifully portrayed ...
well done work.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Priyanshi!

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.