Hard to move on... (Poem/story)

just wanted to share some thoughts...

I wish you loved me

the way I did

I wish you looked at me

the way I did

But there wasn't much of a connection

As we weren't meant for each other

You went your way, and left me to move on

It, wasn't easy...

Shedding tears for 3 months, alone

Unable to tell anyone about you

It was horrible

and I didn't like one bit of it...

But had no other choice

Except to move on... 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must move on. Love cannot be. A powerful poem shared and thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Coyote

[Saumya]

Everyone we meet has a role to play, and that too has a time period.No everyone we wish to stay, stay forever...That's the irony of life sigh*

We may not plans life has for our life, but it surely has a better plan, than we can often think of...It is therefore wiser to enjoying the blessings of presence of all that we have now, because nobody, and nothing lasts forever...People specifically!
Love them with all your heart, till you have them, and don't regret their departure, stay contented for the fact that you played your part well...What's not meant to be never stays, no matter how hard one tries, because life certainly has a plan for blessing us with better people than them, removing some people often.. though some we meet can never be forgotten...But then how it is.Hope heals, but expectation hurts!

Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful poem:)

-Saumya.

[Prashant Bajpai]

the emotions you express are very well framed felt good after reading something wuite true

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Prashant!! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

a sad and broken poem....the words fit in very well and the emotions are so true and direct from the heart..keep writing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Wajiha! :)

[Jessica Lima]

Only a broken heart can truly let in the light. A healthy heart is blind to all that's ugly. That's not a bad thing. But that type of heart, a healthy-whole one, has much to learn.

[Mr.Writer]

I agree with you Jessica, a healthy whole heart indeed has a lot to learn...
Thank you! :)

[Priyanshi]

When something like that happens ,its really hard to move on...very well written...Mr.Writer.
Great write.

[Mr.Writer]

I really agree Priyanshi, thank you! :)

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[BBP]

The part that you mentioned you couldn't tell anyone, lends mystery! Nice touch.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you BBP!! :)

[Bear]

Critique: (I wish you loved me, the way I did) the way I did you - you want someone to love you as much as you love yourself?
(I wish you looked at me, the way I did) the way I did you

Review: Strong feelings from highs to lows taking your readers on an emotional roller-coaster. Just so you know the feeling don't fade with time, if anything they grow stronger as they become memories with time. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Bear for the feedback and review!

[writ rajat]

it is a big story indeed i liked it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Writ! :)