You are the one... (poem)

You are the one...

When I look at you, I'm stunned;

by your beauty

your never-ending beauty

I'm blown away by your smart mind;

always having an answer

to all of my questions

I need to talk to you;

cause if I don't

if feels as if I haven't lived

Your smile gleaming at me

brightening my day;

it's effect, even better than the sun

The way you laugh;

so perfect and elegant

that it needs to be put on repeat

And as you touch me;

my body surrenders

needing more of you

Reviews

[Bear]

It is always fun to read how others interpret relationships and the emotional entanglement that comes with it. I had a professor who claimed she could tell the writers age by how they viewed romance. I never could under stand how that could be possible since experience is what matters not age but she was unforgettable as every time I read a poem on relationships there she is in my head again. Well this poem is a little like that, it has made me think all through your writing talents. You should us you are a romantic at heart :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mr.Writer]

Ooh, that's quite interesting tbh, wish I had a teacher like that lol
Thank you so much Bear!

[Najam Us Saher]

It the first stanza last line did you mean never ending ?
Elegantly written...I liked the description.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam! :)
Lol yeah, I meant never ending :D

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)

[Surya]

Need for love...Shaan you played a trick here and it worked well...I enjoyed it..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya! :)

[Priyanshi]

Cute and lovely poem...what your love means to you can be felt in the poem...and i enjoyed it, Mr. Writer...well done.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Priyanshi! :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Ethan]

Nicely done. However, I would avoid using the word "cause" in general unless you are referring to an actual cause. Overall, good job.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Ethan! Lol yeah, I tried to use slang :D