No escape... (poem)

No escape from this dirty place...

Those daggers and guns taken from my hands

Replaced with fists, stronger than ever

Ready to give punches

To anyone who comes

in my way

My heart, weak in love

Strong in anger

Repeatedly beats to leave this place

Asking forgiveness for the sins

It told me to commit

Everywhere I see

people shooting looks at me

and whispering dirty stuff

This place isn't greater than hell

But there ain't much of a difference either

My hands, tortured with handcuffs

Soon turning tomato red

Begging to be released

but don't know that there isn't an escape

from this dirty place

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Harsh truth of reality was beautifully portrayed.
My heart weak in love but strong in anger is a very well penned phrase.
'Asking forgiveness for the sins it told me to commit'
This sentence speaks a lot our heart misguides us firstly an then beg mercy for repent. I loved that sentence a lot it is so relatable and very thoughtful.
Thank you so much for sharing this poem :)

[Inda]

There is a child like quality to this, The language is both elegant and simple and that clash is what causes me to see a child like quality. Really enjoyed this one!

[Priyanshi]

Written in a brilliant way, and I enjoyed it, friend.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well expressed, last paragraph formed a powerful end , place was once good as heaven but we the people made it as hell..
Very well conveyed and amazing work of yours..