My human clone (Poem)

Thunderful...

Those thunder-like cries

Coming straight from my eyes

Trying to consume me

My heart, already broken;

leaving my heartbeats to be unspoken

And never heard from again

Darkness approaching my soul

Starting to drill a hole

Changing everything 

Everything around me fading away

Turning into a shade of a grey

Within seconds

My reflection unable to be shown

Instead, showing photocopies of my human clone

As my organisms clash together

The sky shattering apart to the furthest

Its clouds falling onto the surface

Landing straight at me

Reviews

[Bear]

Interesting idea I remember a physiology class where the professor said to view emotions separately like a clone. He would have thought you his best student after reading this :~) This is a great writing lesson, there is a abstract element to the emotional content that adds a metaphysical fell, very impressive writing my friend Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Bear! :)
Really appreciated

[Wajiha Nayeem]

felt every word....felt each line....all the stanzas were like stuck into my mind...wonderful work.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Wajiha! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure is all mine.

[Zoya]

Ah, felt your emotions...how we often feel like we've lost control over everything. Well written!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Zoe! :)

[Zoya]

No problem

[L.C. Jarrette]

losing oneself...well done.love it.

[Mr.Writer]

thank you L.C! :)

[L.C. Jarrette]

you're welcome..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thoughtful...You really expressed your emotions very well....

[Mr.Writer]

thank you so much Najam!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Surya]

Pain, I could feel it....Lonliness once I passed...I loved it Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

thank you Surya!! :)

[Sofia]

An excellent write...I loved the rhyming...wonderfully penned...and nyc choice of words... It was amazing...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sofia! :)

[Sofia]

Welcum. :)

[APOORVA]

Darkness approaching my soul
Starting to drill a hole
Changing everything
I HONESTLY CONNECTED TO THESE LINES, WELL WRITTEN
ADMIRABLE CONTENT

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Priyanshi]

This is so touching poem...I can relate myself with it....I loved the rhyming words in the poem....very well written...I really loved it.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.