Ain't losin hope (poem)

Ain't losin hope (poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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Positive thoughts...

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I ain't losin hope
Cuz I'm tryna cope

This pain ain't strong enough;
to get the best of me

Imma take a shot;
to make myself free

There isn't any point;
in givin up

How abou' I do myself a favour;
and get a checkup

I get a weird sense
That somethin' tryna commence 

But all of it is in ma imagination;
my mind makin' it's creation

Hopin' this gives me a boost
And all my sensations get reduced

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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N.
Oh man, this was very intense and scary. Of what could be found when we go get a check up and all the negative thoughts that come with what if something is wrong. Very bold and again terrifying because none of one like having this thought. Amazing and I do amazing job putting these conflicting thoughts in words. N.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much N! :)

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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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