Love was... (Poem)

Love was what happened to me

It gave some hope;

but then shattered it

Love was what tore me apart

Showing two reflections of myself;

but one only being true

Love was what gave me happiness;

until one day, took all of it away

And left despair in me

Love was my guidance;

until it guided me to the wrong path

And blocked me from all ways

Love is now nothing to me;

and will stay like that;

until I find it again

Reviews

[Hope]

Its a touching poem,
But never give up hope.
I liked this.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Neetha :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Some awesome lines and last two is my fav..amazing work

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Farhan :)

[Bear]

Critique: (And blocked me from all ways) I am having a problem with this line as "all ways" doesn't fit the context of the sentence. It could "block me in all ways" or "from all directions" which seems to fit within the direction you were going, just a suggestion.

Review: In the book of life the section on relationships is the largest one and you have just added another page to it. It is always interesting to see the different thoughts, views and emotions others have on the topic. Each page of life's book offers a lesson from the experiences of others. That means you are now one of the teachers in the book of life and if you write enough poems on the minefield of love you could one day be a professor. Welcome to the facility of the book of life :~)
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[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Bear! :)
I really appreciate the detailed review.
Lol, I guess I could become a professor one day :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The below lines. Are true.
"Love is now nothing to me;
and will stay like that;
until I find it again"
Love is wonderful when near. When far away. Make us accept less. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is a wonderful poem...this describes how i feel rn....and this is just lovely!..keep it up.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Wajiha! :)

[heartspeaks]

Good work...sweet . Poetically emotional.. Well done

[Mr.Writer]

Thank heart! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

That's amazing...Always give love a chance...It was beautifully written in short lines...you said a lot in few words...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.... ☺

[Priyanshi]

Beautifully described... how love hurts and provide pain....feels like broken completely...this poem is very well penned ...I loved it.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Priyanshi! :)

[Priyanshi]

You're welcome.

[Zoya]

Well, I guess...this is the peculiarity of love. It often happens that you are too heartbroken to ever love someone, love loses its meaning. You've nicely put down your thoughts. Keep writing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Zoe! :)

[Zoya]

My pleasure

[Surya]

Love gives us pain, shows a path when it is gone it seems like all has scattered, but if one finds a way, there is a miracle waiting for us...Thank you Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No, thank you Surya! :)