Love was... (Poem)

Love was... (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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Love

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Love was what happened to me
It gave some hope;
but then shattered it

Love was what tore me apart
Showing two reflections of myself;
but one only being true

Love was what gave me happiness;
until one day, took all of it away
And left despair in me

Love was my guidance;
until it guided me to the wrong path
And blocked me from all ways

Love is now nothing to me;
and will stay like that;
until I find it again

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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This is really good, it's so deep and relatable a lot. I love how you captured love when it's like happiness and also when it's heartbroken. You don't focus solely on the good part cause sometimes love can do us wrong.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
I agree, sometimes love can hurt us badly...
Angel

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Yes it can, but only if we let it...
Love is an amazing and incredible thing. It can give your life new meaning and make everything beautiful. That is, until you lose it. Then it dulls everything and makes the world seem a darker place. You did very well at showing that from several angles.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Clifford! :)
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N.
Amazing job describing the rollercoaster that is love. It feel amazing going up but terrifying going down but your last line sums it all. 'Until I find it again" , no matter how much we suffered because of love we will do it all over again. Amazing vivid work of what is love. N.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much N! :)
Raw and so relatable. What "love was" and, having gone, what "is" left- "despair". So true. Great form and flow. Time heals all wounds. ..Well-done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Annette! :)
like an old friend who turned on us, one we can never trust again...

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Very true Jacob.
Thank you! :)
I relate to this poem a lot. I can feel your emotion, but I do wish I had more of it to read. Seems like it should definitely be longer. Plus, I can tell you must be angry about how Love has betrayed you in a sense. I want to see that anger in this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Yeah, I could have put more anger into this.
interesting perspective on Love. Amazing how each new generation born on this earth, learns of a new or creates their own concept of what Love is, and or should be.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Maria

7 Years Ago

You're welcome truly love this right here. Get butterflies each time I read this.
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

I really appreciate it Maria :)
Maria

7 Years Ago

Sure thing
ok so im too young to relate this sorta love to you that sorta love
but i can relate it to how my cat literally just ran away....i loved him and he gave no s***s. just ran away. so i feel ya. :( nice poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Sorry about your cat Pia.
Thank you! :=
Another wonderful poem! I enjoyed this, however the ending was sad and true for many people, love is great unless you get burned.. then it becomes something you no longer want or crave... great piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Kesha! :)
I agree, after you taste the side effects of love, it's hard to like it .. read more
Kesha

7 Years Ago

You're welcome and yes :)
Beautiful poem with great emotions. Keep it up. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you Capolavoro :)

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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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