Moving on (Collab with Kesha)

A collab with Kesha :)

Moving On

A collab by:

MR.WRITER AND KESHA

Dressed as a bride, she waited;

waited for prince charming to take her

But unfortunately, he never came;

and she was left to wait, forever

Faces watched her from every direction,

Waited for her tears to come,

Quietly she stormed off;

and never glanced back at the empty space

where he should have stood.

All of her dreams slowly shattered;

like if she was injured and were to fade away

Unable to control her emotions she stood;

stood out in the crashing rain

Pouring her soul out to it.

Collapsing to her knees;

Ruining her white dress,

She stared up at the grey clouds;

and wondered why her life was in pieces,

wondered when things would be better

When suddenly, an angel appeared;

appeared from those grey clouds

Giving her hope and comfort

Shining her with pixie dust

And like prince charming, vanished as well

Happiness washed over her

And she realized that she controlled

her own destiny,

her own fate,

she just had to get up and

make the best of it.

She pulled herself up;

up from the rigid ground

And saw the sun come out

Days later, she went to Paris;

went for a change;

to forget about her loss

Ever since that day,

Instead of cursing him,

she thanked him for leaving,

for if he hadn't,

she never would have had the courage

to become the person she is today.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You two did very well. I liked the positive ending. Life is lesson. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Bear]

This reads like a story you might consider posting it in paragraph form and turning it into a short story or add to it and in time a novel, just a thought. I like it either way Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Bear!

[Bear]

here is what I posted on Kesha's copy: Any time two writers are able to collaborate and create a work of literature is incredible. To merge thoughts on a single subject and synchronize on content, direction, meaning and characters is magical. I give the two of you a Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mr.Writer]

Thanks so much Bear!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You left me speechless. I have no words to say how creative this is.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Najam!! Kesha and I really appreciate it!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're both welcome :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Both of you did a very good job, interesting poem..very well written

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Farhan! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Kesha and I really appreciate it!

[Kesha]

I liked this! Thanks for collabing! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, the collab was really fun as well! :)
Thank you!!

[Kesha]

Yeah you're welcome!