Moving on (Collab with Kesha)

A collab with Kesha :)

Moving On

A collab by:

MR.WRITER AND KESHA

Dressed as a bride, she waited;

waited for prince charming to take her

But unfortunately, he never came;

and she was left to wait, forever

Faces watched her from every direction,

Waited for her tears to come,

Quietly she stormed off;

and never glanced back at the empty space

where he should have stood.

All of her dreams slowly shattered;

like if she was injured and were to fade away

Unable to control her emotions she stood;

stood out in the crashing rain

Pouring her soul out to it.

Collapsing to her knees;

Ruining her white dress,

She stared up at the grey clouds;

and wondered why her life was in pieces,

wondered when things would be better

When suddenly, an angel appeared;

appeared from those grey clouds

Giving her hope and comfort

Shining her with pixie dust

And like prince charming, vanished as well

Happiness washed over her

And she realized that she controlled

her own destiny,

her own fate,

she just had to get up and

make the best of it.

She pulled herself up;

up from the rigid ground

And saw the sun come out

Days later, she went to Paris;

went for a change;

to forget about her loss

Ever since that day,

Instead of cursing him,

she thanked him for leaving,

for if he hadn't,

she never would have had the courage

to become the person she is today.

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

Good collab. The wonderful story of this girl is nicely written in a poem. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Capolavoro! :)

[Maria]

Wow that was just superb. Roller coaster ride, and I like it ends with new hope and a fresh new start.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Maria! :)

[Maria]

Your welcome. Great work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's not how hard we fall, it is whether we can pick ourselves up afterwards...well done as a collab.
sounds like a single voice, you blend well.

reading this i was reminded of an Outsiders hit from the sixties, "Girl in Love"---
j.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Jacob! :)

[pia]

You guys did a wonderful job.
I loved it and all the emotions portrayed here.
Wonderful imagery and very well structured loved it
U guys !!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Pia! :)
We really appreciate it

[Surya]

End was apt....Collaboration was good...I simply enjoyed it dear friends..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya! :)

[Pravir]

The best thing about ur poems is the way you paint the scenes . . perfect detailing . .. Decorated with strong feelings .. . anybody can just simply visualise the whole thing . . very well written

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Pravir! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is soo good..and really a strong piece of work mr.writer and kesha!....i loved this to the largest extent!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Wajiha! Kesha and I really appreciate it

[Zoya]

This is so very strong, something that can lighten up the hearts of the people who are feeling low, who are broken to pieces. A really uplifting and imaginative poem!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Zoe! We really appreciate it

[Zoya]

No problem

[Hope]

A strong and encouraging poem:)
The collab worked really well!
Keep writing guys.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Neetha! :)

[Hope]

My pleasure:)

[Sinbulvinter]

Like I said in Kesha's post of this collab, I really love how your styles mix together so well.
The storytelling in this poem is amazing. I think it's a beautiful story of moving on from pain.
This left such an empowering feeling at the end.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sinbul! :) Really appreciated

[Sinbulvinter]

You're very welcome!