King or Queen (Poem)

King or Queen (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer

Follow me and I'll take you places;
places you've never seen

Hold my hand tight and don't let go
Cause' if you let go, there'll be a great scene

You'll fall in a world with people you don't know
And this time you won't be king or queen

Your chapter should have ended ages ago
And trust me, you won't be clean

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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This is amazing
Well since its so open ended ill analyse it in a way that lets me relate to it. Holding on to people who are the most special to u and treat your a king or a queen
Ppl who let u stand out and let you be special
And when you let go of em
U fall back into a crowd that doesnt appreciate you the way they do
Great job i loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pia! :)



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Thoughtful and rhymed very well. I felt like you forced the rhyme in the last line.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Lol thank you Najam!! :D I kinda did force it
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I felt that....you're welcome 😁
Truth in words filled with feelings...I enjoyed it Shaan...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
this was well written.....i loved it and the sentences were amazing...i loved it!!....happy writing shaan!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Wajiha! :)
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

my pleasure mr. writer!...keep writing interesting stuff like this all the time!...will be waiting f.. read more
This is really amazing mate, wonderful poem, well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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