Emotions (Poem)

Emotions (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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emotions

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My feelings
My emotions
Are being played with
Cause' they aren't in control 
And are being mocked at

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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This place in the poetry will piss you off. Be mocked. Can lead to problems. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


Awful when someone messes with you.. nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe you did too ;) I mean played with someone's emotions lol jk :P
Not a nice feeling when you get played around with...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotions are filled in this work too. Well penned. 😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong emotion, Fierce declaration.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its hard to control emotions...
Really good poem...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is soo nice and good to read...emotions felt and written, wonderful..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotions and feelings rite....but cross this barrier...u will glow...I enjoyed it shaan..:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Relatable words Shaan..few says a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You said a lot in few words. I know how one feels when their emotions are being ignored or mocked. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 17, 2017
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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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