This feeling... (Poem)

This feeling, comes back and forth...

Every second of its torture forces me to stop breathing 

It turns my world upside down and unleashes new terrors

Makes my life hollow, like a ghost;

not like those cool ghosts at Hogwarts, more like the deadly ones... 

I go from happy to sad, to being super hyped 

Get weaker and pale, while it becomes stronger and powerful

It makes me feel like a tissue;

always being used and wasted for ones motive

It turns my heart into stone;

having no feelings for anyone anymore

Sucks on all the positive thoughts, like it's candy

Spreading all over my body, like wildfire

Burning my heart crisply

Consuming what's left of me

By: MrWriter(Shaan)

Reviews

[Surya]

Words from depressed heart....well writing throws away a but of it...keep writing...
I liked it Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you really much Surya! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

"Makes my life hollow, like a ghost;
not like those cool ghosts at Hogwarts, more like the deadly ones... 
I go from happy to sad, to being super hyped " beautiful lines..
Well penned Shaan..very well expressed i really enjoyed it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you really much Farhan

[Najam Us Saher]

You really expressed your feelings very well. I liked the last lines the most. This is what I can relate to as well.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Najam! Really appreciated :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.