Hate (Poem)

Just a thought...

What world are we in?

Shouldn't we love each other?

And try to find peace?

Reviews

[Sinbulvinter]

For only three lines, this hits so deep and makes me think.
I was thinking something like this myself, earlier, with all the news on an War in the near future, and the sad state of hatred this world is in right now. I just wish for World Peace, as cliche as it sounds, but I know it's something that we won't get for many, many, many years - if at all. It makes me feel so lost inside.
We should love each other, live in peace, and have harmony with each other and this world. You're completely right... By us hating each other instead of sticking together, or us just trying a blind eye to all the hate and madness in this world, we're only killing it quicker... So sad, that something so simple, some people just don't get.

[Mr.Writer]

I know right, I wish people could just come together and settle their differences and be one and equal.
Thank you so much :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this made me think deep and really really thought provoking!....good work!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thought provoking questions. I really liked the way you conveyed a strong message in very few words.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

you're welcome

[Surya]

Haan...We should but if every being must think same to achieve it...
I liked it Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

That's true, everyone should think the same
Thank you!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Deep thought, we should find peace indeed, an important message conveyed in these 3 lines..brilliant

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you :)

[B]

One of the most loud feelings in the world is hate
And those who hate simply can not write
they can't create anything beautiful
but i see so much love in our world
a very strong message .... hate is best left behind for its thoughts can disturb your mind

very well written

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, we should destroy all hate for each other...
Thank you :)

[B]

And all the fake illusions that that hate exists
Trust is the only way
to love and be loved
trust kills hate

[Stacy Purvis]

...OR pitchforks and torches all around!!! 😂😂😂
Just kiddin'

[Mr.Writer]

Lol :D
Thank you :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

It is not this world, but the other you seek.

[Mr.Writer]

That's true as well,
Thank you for reviewing :)