Four seasons (Poem)

I still remember

The days we spent together

In all four seasons

Reviews

[Kesha]

This was elegantly written, gives you a somber feel. Nicely done

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Kesha! :)

[Kesha]

Youre welcome!

[Gee]

Yep, I'm with the silente chap, not a fan of them but this does what it says on the can...

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, there are different styles of poetry, and some may like haikus and some may not. Thank you for reviewing

[apennylate]

Pretty nifty, this one, actually... Still not a fan of haiku's... But again, not bad... Well penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you Silente!

[apennylate]

Haha, you are most welcome...

[pia]

This is very interesting
You've got a nice style
Also the picture makes it very soothing and welcoming

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Pia!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is nice. I really love the pic you chose for this haiku 'cause it enhances the effect :))
Btw, if it were Pakistan, there would be just the two seasons lol :p
Nicely penned, Shaan :))

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you Yumna! :)
Oh yeah lol, in Pakistan it doesn't snow right? :D :)

read moreLol thank you Yumna! :)
Oh yeah lol, in Pakistan it doesn't snow right? :D :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh it snows but not where I live lol
You're welcome 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Oh, sorry, :D
I don't like snow to be honest, and it doesn't like me either xD

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah since I haven't actually seen it except for movies so idk lol but I love winter 😉😊

[Mr.Writer]

Lol :D I believe in Kashmir it snows, right? Is it far from Karachi. :)
And are you sure winter likes you? :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Karachi is like south and Kashmir north so you get the idea lol we're near the sea. It's never gonna snow here anyways 😶
Yeah winter does like me but it's just the 2 months of it haha

[Mr.Writer]

Oh lol, that makes sense.
At least winter likes you... Even if it's just two months... :Dread moreOh lol, that makes sense.
At least winter likes you... Even if it's just two months... :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think so too haha 😛😂😂

[Mr.Writer]

Lol haha :D

[CAPOLAVORO]

These are good lines. Full of emotions through the season. Nice Haiku. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Capolavoro! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and photos. Create places and memories. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I liked this one.

[Mel Jayne]

I really like the words that you put into this. They feel like they have a heavier meaning behind them. They are very musical and I think the picture adds something special to the overall feel.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Mel! :)
I appreciate it

[B]

So sweet
I can relate
Only love doesn't stop
If it is love

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[heartspeaks]

This made me smile....and the picture refreshes the reader... its really nice...
umm...like a saga in three lines..

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Heart! I'm really glad it made you smile :)

[heartspeaks]

all your writings does..😊

[Mr.Writer]

That's really nice :)