Sunshine (Poem)

So random :P

You are my sunshine

As you never cross the line

By not drinking wine

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

nicely written.. i enjoyed it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you!

[Surya]

Haha, Shaan that was pretty...
I liked it, haha...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much Surya :P

[Stacy Purvis]

HA HA! What does this mean? I'm so cornfuzzled.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol it doesn't mean much :D

[Stacy Purvis]

I drink coffee, tea, and lemonade. ; )

[Mr.Writer]

Lol?! ummm? :P

[duff]

It's clever and very sneaky! Nice job:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Duff! :)

[Kesha]

Lol that made me chuckle!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol I'm glad :D

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! Thats really good ..

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much!

[pia]

ahahah i love how you managed to portray a message in just 3 lines. That's talent !!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you Pia :D

[B]

Lol
Ok this is much better
It's funny lol

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you! :D

[CAPOLAVORO]

Lol. This gives the girls an idea on how to get your attention then. Cute Senryu. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you!! :)

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

With few words you have acheived great meaning. There is also a light playful tone here.
Thank you for sharing and God Bless

Sheer Terror

[Mr.Writer]

No problem and thank you Sheer! :)