Run boy! (Poem)

I will fight 'till the end

Not caring about myself

I will follow the path of sunlight

And there will be no one to stop me, tonight

I will keep on going, no matter how much pain I'm in

Because my country needs me

They say

"Run boy, run boy!

Rpg's are coming!

So run boy, run boy!

Smg's as well!"

I will fight, in the daylight and tonight, forever

Until my country sends cries of joys to me!

They'll say

"Run boy, run boy!

Come back home to us

Quickly, quickly, we need you! 

So run boy, run boy!

Win for us!"

But what if I lose... in the daylight or night, forever...

I need some motivation to keep me up...

And my country will say

"Run boy, run boy!

Those rpg's are still coming!

So run boy, run boy

Smg's as well!"

And in the fight, tonight, I won for life...

For my country, I made a thousand sacrifices...

The moon gleaming at me, saying goodbye

As I take my last breaths, tonight...

I fought till the end...

And didn't care about myself

But at least I won...

Author's Note

My friend sang this song on request :D

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Very strong and emotional poem which depicts love for country. Beautifully written. I liked it.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

A good message you convey through this poem. I heard the song too. would have been more better if there was some music to it ;) but I liked the tone of it...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Yumna! I know, :D I was thinking of adding some music, but didn't know if any tune would fit the song :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Shaan :) A pleasure always :))

[Mr.Writer]

:) I still have to post the first chapter of "WHO?"
lol, the editing has been pushing me back really bad xD I make so much mistakes in my writing, but they always help me learn more later :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

oh just keep on writing and you'll learn! that's what we all do :) ;)
I'll be looking forward to it :))

[Mr.Writer]

I will :) All of us go through this phrase and pass it as well :)

[Mr.Writer]

Just some patience :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

true indeed :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha patience I can do with ;P

[Mr.Writer]

Lol yumna xD

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Some really fucked up s**t going down there, Shaan lol my sympathies with you 😂😂😂

[Surya]

A Patriot doesn't care any except the fact that he lives for the country and his country...Your honest words, I loved them..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya!! :)
Very true :)

[Saud Maroof]

Reminds me of a book. I was left confused by this poem.

[Mr.Writer]

That's nice, what book?
how was the poem Saud?

[Saud Maroof]

haha The Reluctant Fundamentalist
Novel by Mohsin Hamid.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol Saud! : D
So, any thoughts for my song/poem :)

[Saud Maroof]

it is a good book and hence a compliment i wish to read better from you.

[Mr.Writer]

Umm, I'm a bit confused lol

[Saud Maroof]

i know and i am sorry for that.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem

[Coyote Poetry]

Had the feel of Forest Gump in the words. War is hard to run from. Comes to you. I liked the song and the flow of thoughts. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Coyote!! :)
'Twas really appreciated

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.