Run boy! (Poem)

I will fight 'till the end

Not caring about myself

I will follow the path of sunlight

And there will be no one to stop me, tonight

I will keep on going, no matter how much pain I'm in

Because my country needs me

They say

"Run boy, run boy!

Rpg's are coming!

So run boy, run boy!

Smg's as well!"

I will fight, in the daylight and tonight, forever

Until my country sends cries of joys to me!

They'll say

"Run boy, run boy!

Come back home to us

Quickly, quickly, we need you! 

So run boy, run boy!

Win for us!"

But what if I lose... in the daylight or night, forever...

I need some motivation to keep me up...

And my country will say

"Run boy, run boy!

Those rpg's are still coming!

So run boy, run boy

Smg's as well!"

And in the fight, tonight, I won for life...

For my country, I made a thousand sacrifices...

The moon gleaming at me, saying goodbye

As I take my last breaths, tonight...

I fought till the end...

And didn't care about myself

But at least I won...

Author's Note

My friend sang this song on request :D

Reviews

[B]

You know this is totally random
But I noticed boys and guys get this fight mood out of nowhere and it's really scary sometimes for a calm person. If you don't fight as a female you start fighting randomly just to keep up with the gender lol
But it's like males are born with it

Females usually just sit there thinking. Where did that come from and how do I dismantle it lol
Without blowing up

Well done. Sorry if I am totally off

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, no problem! :D
It is scary at times, that's true...

[B]

they just go off
so you go off
its like let me out do him
but i fail so i give up lol

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, never give up

[B]

Oh i do
I can't keep it up
i get tired lol

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, that happens sometimes :D

[B]

yes .... and he can easily get me there :P

[Mr.Writer]

Uh umm, lol

[B]

lol ............ its all funny

[richieb]

Well written patriotic poem portraying selfless duty for ones country. Nice bravado pitch to keep the tempo strong. I enjoyed your poem.
Richie b.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much RichieB! :)

[Jessica Lima]

There is no time wasted if we are doing something for a cause. :) I am glad to read something so positive from you after a tiring day at work. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Jessica! :)

[JessyJacob]

let love grow, peace will grow too. Nice poetry and singer too sang well. thank you for such freshness to my mind, in this night.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Jessy :)

[JessyJacob]

one simple question, do you care and love me for my life?

[Kesha]

I enjoyed the patriotism conveyed in this piece.. it doesn't matter what happens as long as you try that's the message I received at least. Nicely penned!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Kesha!

[Kesha]

You're welcome!

[heartspeaks]

Very well penned...its not so easy to convey such beautiful word...the patriotism the courage the will power and most of all sheer selflessness... Marvellous .. well done Mr.Writer... it was a true feel write.... honoured to read it...#salute...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Heart!! It's really appreciated :)
Salute to the soldiers who fought for us :)

[heartspeaks]

😊 glad....

[Abhishek Asthana]

so passionate,, its almost like a warrior himself wrote it down... patriotic one... awesome... thank you for sharing

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Abhishek! :)
Very true

[Farhan Shaikh]

Powerful poem with emotions
Well penned and good job

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Farhan!! :)