Monsters (Poem)

Psychotic monsters
Ruining the planet earth
And killing humans

Reviews

[Kesha]

Great piece, the monsters could really be anything... crazy people, our minds, robots, scary green swamp monsters lol nicely done!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thats true! :D Thank you!

[Daisy Tozer]

Unique and thought provoking. A solid haiku! I like it.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Daisy!!

[Najam Us Saher]

I hope they don't find me 😀 Just kidding.
This was something different haiku. I liked it.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Very clear and real. Pchotic monsters could be anyone. Could be ANYTHING. ;) Good write.

[Mr.Writer]

True :) Thank you!

[B]

Sadly this is so true
Most of those people calling themselves presidents are deeply disturbed
but only lately
In the 80s that wasnt so much the case
and when it happened it was an odd thing

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, it is true though.
Thank you so much Solo :)

[Surya]

A truth said..
Agreed with Farhan and Yumna...
I enjoyed..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's true...
I agree with Yumnakay
Human themselves are the psychotic monsters..

[Mr.Writer]

Yep very true Farhan :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh it's cool to see you writing haikus, Shaan! Somehow I've never learned how to :P

This has a good message in it. Humans themselves are the biggest psychotic monsters that roam the earth...
Well penned :)

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, when I'm in the mood of writing, I like to write Haikus XD
You're right Yumna, we are the monsters
Thank you for reviewing!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's nice!
And not necessarily 'we', Shaan 😉 but humans in general 😛
You're welcome. A pleasure always 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Lol sorry about that Yumna :P
I always say "we" ugh :p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah well yeah I was hurt! Being called a monster 😎 lol jk 😛😂

[Mr.Writer]

Lol I know :D
I started reading your book and it's very engaging so far! The first chapter really engaged me and the prologue even of how the plane will get hijacked! So interesting! In my opinion, It's well done!
I'll be reading chapter 2 in a while :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh thank you for reading. I haven't gotten around to write the hi jacking part yet. I'll be doing that soon. Glad you liked it 😊

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! :)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, isn't that the truth. Great haiku. Izzy

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :))

[Ace St. Jean]

Short and sweet I like that, like my most recent short story.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :)