Synopsis

Are you scared?

8 friends...

Who adore each other to bits

Always hang out after school

Text day and night 

And even love each other

Not to mention, bully a kid to death

Well now... that friendship has come to an end

Each week, a person from that group dissapears

Him or her later returning dead

The remaining friends try to find out the killer, but they're late everytime, as another get's taken.

Soon, all of them would be dead, and the killer would remain unknown forever... 

Could it be that kid they bullied?

Has he come back to haunt them?

If so... how?

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

If you don't start using spell check, you're going to get a spanking.
Ha!
Gang Stalking and Bullying is on the rise. So much so that it's become a serious crime. Judges are looking for the right group to make an example of.
People don't come back from the dead.
Guardian Angels seek vengeance. ; )

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Anastasia! :) xD
I kinda made some mistakes and do deserve a spanking tbh lol

[Stacy Purvis]

Lol...Come on... XD

[Mr.Writer]

Lol XD how was the synopsis

[Stacy Purvis]

Well, I'm totally against bullying, so I hope they all get caught and spend time in jail, personally.

[Mr.Writer]

Well you'll have to wait and read the story to find out what happens :)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, no not scared but intrigued, it is rarely the obvious person. Would be great if you worked on developing the story. Izzy

[Mr.Writer]

Thanks Island! Lol, I'll be posting the first chapter mostly tomorrow :)

[Broken Hearts]

This kind of reminds me of Pretty Little Lairs.

[Mr.Writer]

Oh, ok :) Thanks for reviewing :)

[Saud Maroof]

Buddy i am going to be extremely straight and tell you why this plot is not for me. You wont be able to acheive anything new if you keep your eyes narrow and fixed to the movies and books you like. Write something new. Now i know you will work hard cultivate this story to be very satisfying but a student who studies to be a scientist doesnot become a scientist to test universal laws he defies theories and works towards creating new laws i hope you understand. We all have a sudden light bulb moment and plot we get excited for but in my exp not every idea is a billion dollar jackpot. I hope you understood my view.

Sorry for not being intrigued
Thanks for sharing

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you for reviewing! I understand that not all stories are for everyone, and that some people like and dislike specific genres. No problem, you were just sharing your opinion. :)

[Saud Maroof]

But dont let me demotivate you it is one persons opinion who will let you know if he was wrong after reading the real content.

[Saud Maroof]

This is not about genre for me i have read mystery crime and horror before but having very little knowledge about your idea i hint that you are falling in a pit of normality and not really putting all your moneyon it.

Good luck. I hope i change my mind

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Saud! I really hope that I can make this story a good one

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's an interesting plot. I rather think the killer could be one among the eight ;)
I would love to see how you proceed with this story :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Yumna! :) I won't give any hints yet, nice try though ;) lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hahah I will keep on guessing with every chapter you post ;)
you're welcome, Mr.... :))

[Mr.Writer]

Just don't guess too much, it might hurt your head :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hahahah that would never happen ;P

[Mr.Writer]

Ok then, :D just giving you the heads up, this story might make you go to direct conclusions :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well that could be since I'm so smart hahah :p

[Mr.Writer]

Hahah :D It could be

[Zoya]

Looks like the beginning of a captivating story! Keep writing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Zoe!! :)

[Zoya]

no problem!

[Najam Us Saher]

Interesting....nice theme and concept.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome☺

[matrixmark]

So we are introduced to a mystery story. A killer on the loose.....who could it be...
I do doubt its the bullied kid - I feel this is just misdirection BUT nonetheless its a good set up to hopefully a great killer story.

One thing - ' dissapears' - should be disappears.

Intrigued - yes I am.
Will I continue - For sure.

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Mark! :) Lol, I won't say anything on the murderer, but I hope it turns out well :)

[matrixmark]

I look forward to reading more. It reminds me of the late 90's slasher movies.

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, I kinda had an inspiration of those movies to make this story

[matrixmark]

I thought so. I could tell.

Mark.

[Surya]

Well, a good synopsis, it reminded me of Agatha Christie's 'And There Were None'...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya! :)