I give up (Poem)

I GIVE UP

BY: MrWriter (Shaan)

Sunshine and rainbows.

That's all that he wanted from reality

But he got over that as his harsh life passed by, drowning all the happiness inside him

He now was a 24/7 machine, working and working day and night

Having no time to let his emotions get the best of him, let alone smiling

The positivity and energy he had before all went down the drain

He only had one wish, and that was to be happy

Unfortunately, life couldn't give it to him

He waited for many years but never got it

Sorrow seemed to overlap it as years passed by

While writing day and night in his diary, his emotions may seem to pour out, but they get drilled back in

He keeps on asking for happiness, expecting it to come any moment, but it doesn't 

But he won't accept that...

He just WON'T

"Oh life... I've always appreciated what you've done for me... 

Just please do me a favor and find me some happiness... cause I can't seem to find it anywhere, no matter where I look.

If you expect me to try again, I won't, cause I give up!"

Sincerely,

Shaan

Author's Note

Hey guys! Haven't written for a while actually, so this might not be so well done :D
Any feedback is really appreciated :)

Reviews

[Sam]

I enjoyed reading it! It was certainly good!!

[Mr.Writer]

It's great that you enjoyed reading it! Thanks Sam!

[heartspeaks]

Its so sad when we work on something we don't really like ...we don't find that peace.. felt that..been there...This poem was not relatable, it was more like me speaking. Good work...yeah you dint write recently but this is really good

[Mr.Writer]

I know Heart, not all poems are the ones we like :)
Thanks so much for reviewing!

[heartspeaks]

true... but the best part about such poems is , they lighten the emotional burdens of our heart. I liked this one for that particular reason

[Mr.Writer]

Thats true Heart :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

It's a good work, u haven't written for a while that doesn't mean that you will not write well😂😂
I believe it's still good..

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Farhan!! :)