Roses are... (Poem)

Roses may be red...

But violets aren't blue

This poem is a mistake

Just like you

The end... 

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Few roses may be red, and all others are red only.
But voilets arent blue, meaning, they are flowery little sensitive, yes true but also black. It was a mistake because, you have seen right rose which is a red, and but also blue. But you have seen voilet thought to be blue, but they are never blue, implying they never grow?

nice, same i have for you,
Few boys play as if kids, but may look matured, boys who are matured are never kids. Implying, it was a mistake, that you were a kid, but not in fact. I am not missing both things in you.

The X(collegemate) also liked Red rose, but I wasnt red, feel like to say you dont miss red, as you will have missmatch with brown, to be beside red, not sure whether it is true? you have to tell.

If you knew it as a mistake, then 3*365days time is just gone for what reason? went as if you were blind looking at me?

I need my land, no more submission, till last second, Mission kashmir, its not that its is anybody's, i want to be under good control, not in somebody, who doesnt even know how to live. They crossed borders of India which I have seen previously, and kept a border LOC, but if they intrude, then for sure I will get back all my border crossing thier loc, and getting J&K back to right place. Yes we can to wage a war, why not be me one among them wrapped with Indian flag.

[Mr.Writer]

That is true Jessy, thank you for the detailed review!
This poem was meant to be a joke lol.
I'm sorry if I made a mistake
T

[JessyJacob]

So you feel it as mistake, then what step you will take, you will ignore and stay away from her?read moreSo you feel it as mistake, then what step you will take, you will ignore and stay away from her?

[JessyJacob]

I have seen, what you were, both kid and man), but I never wanted a type, just wanted you, I know I didnt made a mistake, thing is only you feel, made a mistake, thought of changing to red I think, I also you are not more like man too, always wished to be little guy, having fun, then if I am like that then, why, why do you feel a mistake.

Yes my family treat as kid, especially my father, though I am this old, but I shout on him too, getting angry too, and also like red too, may not be red.

[gypsy scribbler]

Nice! I love the brevity :-). One doesn't need many words.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Gypsy!

[matrixmark]

The piece was short and sharp but I felt had a slight viscousness in it too - Almost like a sting in the tail. Or in this case a sting in the 'tale'

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol :P You've been thinking really deep :) Thanks!! :)

[Mr.Writer]

I always like the reviews you give Mark :)
Thanks once again!

[matrixmark]

Its what I do.
Not all the time though.
Quality piece Shaan.

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank u :)

[matrixmark]

As always you are most very welcome.

Mark.

[heartspeaks]

Crazy.... good implementing though... well done

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you heart!! :) I know right! It is crazy xD

[B]

Ayyyyyy
That hurts
through a smile lol

quite a talent you got there

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much Solace!! :)
I'm sorry if it hurted xD

[B]

No pain no gain :)

[Mr.Writer]

That's true :)

[Tony Jordan]

Never go into comedy Mr Joke. Lol
Just kidding lol
this is inspiring.

[Stacy Purvis]

On the contrary! He absolutely should be in comedy! He is full of hilarity and surprises!

[Tony Jordan]

It was a joke - lighten up ...lmao

[Stacy Purvis]

If I get any lighter, I'll be a 👻

[Tony Jordan]

Lol - oh you should go into comedy
hilaaaaaaarious ....lmao

[Stacy Purvis]

😂😂😂 Ta-da!

[Tony Jordan]

That's it ????
Oh I want a refund ...
hehe hehe
just kidding...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol :D Thank you Tony!! :D
Well all of us should go into comedy :)
It will make us feel more happy :)
lol xD

[Tony Jordan]

Now THAT's funny...lmao
:D

[Mr.Writer]

xD I didn't intend for it to be funny but apparently it is xD

[Tony Jordan]

See...laughter is the best medicine after all hahahah

[Mr.Writer]

True true :p

[Stacy Purvis]

It's true that violets aren't blue. Which leaves the reader to delve deeper metaphorically to discover the deeper truth.

[Mr.Writer]

That's true Anastasia. Thank you for reading!! :)

[Stacy Purvis]

You're welcome, as always.
I look forward to your next surprise. Ahem... 😉

[Mr.Writer]

Oh yeah... ;) thank you!
It's going to be quite a challenge but also fun :)

[Stacy Purvis]

You are one of my favorites. I'm always astonished at what I will discover next.

[apennylate]

The challenge of lightning finding him nightly! :3

[apennylate]

Roses can be black, blue, or white.. But not violet, so with violence, I choke the joke of a mistake that is you when making these crudely colored dreams evaporate... The end... Thanks for sharing, such a mean-spirited little ditty... Loved it... Colorfully penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much Silente!! :D I just quickly thought of it and wrote it :D

[apennylate]

Those are my favorites, the quickly lined grime... You are ever so welcome, Mr.Big-bad writer-man... I saw you take on a word challenge earlier... Would you perhaps be interested in a sentence from me...?

[apennylate]

For you to write about, that is...

[Mr.Writer]

For sure Silente :)
Anything you wish

[apennylate]

Hmm, all right... How about you twist one of my lines...? Can be any length, can be about anything, but you gotta rhyme each word.

[apennylate]

Insipid lightning finds me inviting the slighting of hiding mice and icing for blighted tidings against me

[apennylate]

Have fun, and enjoy

[Mr.Writer]

I'm "oohing" right now! Such tongue twisting lines... seem's like the challenge is on! :)
Thanks Silente!

[apennylate]

I anxiously await the arrival of your glorious chopping of my style...

[Mr.Writer]

Me too! :)
So I'm supposed to change the line you provided me with right?

[apennylate]

Aye, twist it in order, which means that since the first word is "insipid", something that goes with that... And so on, etc, etc... You can, however, add or shorten syllables... The choice is yours...

[Mr.Writer]

Ohh thanks Silente! I'm quite excited to do this actually

[JessyJacob]

I never knew your type, i know only the type where you were with me, but that was your responsibility, never felt you got bored of me, then why break promise, atleast you had spent so much fun with famliy, but unncessarily on a single person, which could have gone with ADHD, a medicinal tablet or ayurvedic meditation, if i challenge you back for parents, can you give that time where you used to call your mom and talk to her daily, and also to dad, sister too, may not be with me, but just with a wicked smile, being telepathic hug.

[JessyJacob]

Also you had chat with your buddies, where you had little time, and come back with rushing smile, early in the morning at 6am, skipping running.

[Mr.Writer]

Yep, true :)

[JessyJacob]

its true i like voilet/purple, deep inside even if you delve into, with 1000 petals opened on sahasrar, shows I am little younger to you. I will stay out with your 4, but will make you run and also appa too, on the bushes, mushrooms, and i will make eat kyser the biscuits, without missing all the past days gone, which she supposed to get. Ya I get scared with your friend, esp the four little minded, feeling as if more smart. they just doenst even know dance,

bindu pooshmar.... all together with my family, yumna too. I will just watch your dance, being audience, I like to watch.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :)

[JessyJacob]

sorry, bumbroo, sham rang bumbrooo.....

[JessyJacob]

I love jammu and kashmir.

[JessyJacob]

It needs to be in safe hands, a beautiful place at atleast to visit, with highest power, if given to wrong persons, they juast ignore, close the doors of. How long we suffer this illegal intrusion, we can take care of refugees. its people decision, who knows what they want now after seeing me.

[JessyJacob]

Elections, yes not majority but who support the right cause, and smartly play diplomatically.

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah, :) :)

[apennylate]

O.......K.....

[Surya]

Haha!!...That's funny.....Cooll!!

[Mr.Writer]

XD Thanks so much Surya! :D

[Surya]

You are welcome Shaan..:)