I'm watching you (Poem)

I'm watching you...

Observing how you leave out of the blue

Without telling me

I grab my keys and start the car

Driving wherever you go

You notice me and start walking faster

My speed also starts increasing 

You take a left and run into the forest

I stop my car in the middle of the road and enter the forest

Bushes swaying on my face I stop

I hear the sound of panting and footsteps

I take out my pistol and fire it straight ahead

BOOM! 

I hear groaning ahead, not far from me

I walk ahead slowly, making sure it is you

And indeed it is...

I kick you in the stomach, making sure more blood spurts out

Wails echoed the forest, scaring the birds

They tweet fast as they fly away

I start to suffocate you, leaving you gasping for breath

I point my pistol on your forehead. 

"I'm watching you." I say with a chuckle

BOOM!

Author's Note

This is purely fictional :) this isn't intended for anyone and is just for fun

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

Cheese N Rice. Man, be careful what you write and post. Law enforcement consider every forum or social media admissible in court.
Not saying you're a stalker or killer...
But someone might think you are.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hear hear 😉😛

[Mr.Writer]

True true, thanks for letting me know :)

[Stacy Purvis]

😉 Uh yep.

[Tony Jordan]

Omg - I got so many screen caps of this and your account and your IP address and you are f**ked. lol

just kidding (got the caps tho...lol)

[Stacy Purvis]

LMAO 😂😂😂

[Mr.Writer]

Lol Tony :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahahah the title caught my attention at once 'cause that's more like you, Shaan! Seems more like a threat lol
About the poem, it's gruesomely good 😉😊
I liked the visuals that come in the mind more like how a killer works..
Interesting and fun read for me. Nicely penned 👍

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Yumna!! :) Really appreciated! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Mr...
Always a pleasure reading 😊😊