Please go away! (Poem)

Every time when I look at you, my heart starts beating fast

How tall and fast you are, it makes me even more scared

When I go away from you, I see you come back!

I don't look into at you this time, I turn away in the fear that I might puke

Me, being with you would be impossible no matter how many people like you!

Forget going on you ever!

I never liked you...

You were never perfect for me, no matter how close you come to me everywhere I go in the amusement park

Roller coaster, please go away... 

Author's Note

I tried using Tina's style ;)

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

Well, where to begin?
The sentence structure needs tweaked, and the grammar, too.
The question is: Do you care about these things?
Moving forward...am I to assume that a person is your "roller coaster"?
Actions speak louder than words. Learn to walk away, perhaps, and just keep walking. 😉
Entertaining read. You never cease to make me laugh! 😂

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Anastasia! :) I really appreciate your feedback

[Stacy Purvis]

Likewise! It's an enjoyable read. 😊

[Stacy Purvis]

I should have added that the tense goes back and forth between present and past, sometimes within the same sentence which can be very confusing for the reader.

[Mr.Writer]

Oh ok :) Thank you!

[Tina H.W.]

Well, Mr. Writer. This made me smile (in a good way!) I don't believe I've ever read a poem which is the opposite to love! I thought it was good. Oh how at some point in our lives we make contact with such people but always hide our feelings. You just told it like it is!
I really liked this! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Tina H.W.]

You are welcome so much! ;)