Our past (Story)

I feel your head resting on my shoulder

You may fall asleep, but deep down inside, I know you're awake

I know that the past is still haunting you to this moment and it'll torture you till you die

You shudder and change corners way too often and breath heavily

But we've got to be strong!

For each other...

For our future...

We can't let those memories haunt us and add more misery to our life

We can't let them win... because in the end we'll be the winners!

The strongest people alive and the most peace bringing ones

We'll be everyone's role models... imagine that!

We are learning our lesson from our mistakes

Just like author's learn from their mistakes when his or her book's publishing is rejected

But... what is our mistake? 

What is our dreadful past in which we want to rectify and forget?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The questions of life.
"But... what is our mistake?
What is our dreadful past in which we want to rectify and forget?"
I enjoyed the complete poem. The above lines were my favorite. They are real life and true. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Broken Hearts]

This is a lovely piece of work! I found myself remembering old memories that I had buried deep. Thanks for sharing.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)
I really appreciate it, thank u :)

[Island Hippy]

This is a very thoughtful piece of writing. I think it's an opportunity for the reader to ask ourselves a few questions. I love the line 'The strongest people alive and the most peace bringing ones' there is so much truth in that line. Izzy.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!! It's really appreciated

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[Jessica Lima]

I feel like this is too short to be a story. But I felt something by reading it. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! It's really appreciated :) I know it kinda is too short :)

[Stacy Purvis]

The mistake is allowing anyone else in your relationship. Two lost souls find each other and bravely take on the world together.
I love this. Thank you for sharing!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Aubrey Harrell]

Wonderful piece of work here. Your way of preaching is this right here. Love it Writer!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Aubrey! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wowiiee it is lovely piece if work..well penned very good write

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Mystery]

This is simply eye opening and brings me life. Choice of words demonstrates the pain as if you where once affected.

[Mr.Writer]

Thanks so much!! :) It's really appreciated!! :)

[ChrissieDH]

I really like this poem. I like the fact that you didn't mention what the mistakes were as it allows the reader to identify to the writing by thinking about their own mistakes. Nicely written!

[Mr.Writer]

Thanks so much!! :) I really appreciate it! :)

[B]

c'est tres bon monsieur
Bravo !!!

[Mr.Writer]

Merci mon ami! :D