Unity (Poem)
A Poem by
Mr.Writer
We are all the
same We need peace and harmony
For us to unite
© 2017 Mr.Writer
Reviews
You wrote the truth in 14 words. We must seek peaceful solutions over threats of war. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote! :))
6 Years Ago
You are welcome my friend.
Agree with your extract, lovely
Posted 7 Years Ago
Agree with your extract, lovely
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! :)
A Haiku is meant to be to the point while promoting wonderment. Great job!! Enjoyed it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
A Haiku is meant to be to the point while promoting wonderment. Great job!! Enjoyed it.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! :)
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Yes, we should turn ourselves inside out so we all would look the same, lol. Nice write.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Yes, we should turn ourselves inside out so we all would look the same, lol. Nice write.
7 Years Ago
Thank you! :)
And sometimes it's when the peace and harmony is gone that we realize how much we need it, and not just for unity among us but for everything else too...
Deep write, well penned :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
And sometimes it's when the peace and harmony is gone that we realize how much we need it, and not just for unity among us but for everything else too...
Deep write, well penned :)
7 Years Ago
Thank you Yumna! :) It's really appreciated
7 Years Ago
you're welcome, Mr...... ;) A pleasure :)
7 Years Ago
Yumna, may I ask, if you could umm, review endearment, my poem please? :) Sorry, just asking
And in unity there is strength
In any place, community or culture
Its all about being united
Posted 7 Years Ago
And in unity there is strength
In any place, community or culture
Its all about being united
7 Years Ago
Very true! Thank you for reviewing
very nice one but so short
Posted 7 Years Ago
very nice one but so short
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! It's a haiku so it's supposed to be short :D
So Beautiful, and very true. I had a friend once who said, "Unity divides and Division unites."
It's a paradox. What do you think?
Posted 7 Years Ago
So Beautiful, and very true. I had a friend once who said, "Unity divides and Division unites."
It's a paradox. What do you think?
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! :) I agree with your friend! He's right
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Added on March 29, 2017
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Mr.Writer Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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