Smile (Poem)

Smile (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer

I walk slowly down the hallway of my school, feeling lonely
I hear the chatter of my fellow class mates
They're laughing, teasing each other and even taking selfies
By accident, I come in one their selfies they claimed to "post" on Instagram 
They decide for me to take a groupie picture of them and then tell me to get lost
My fingers tremble, my vision get's blurry, I walk in a zigzag
I knock into my classmate, and he starts to swear directly at me 
"Move b****!" and pushes me away
I decide to go talk to Mrs. Smith, but she tells me to talk to a friend
The class gets louder and I try to act "cool" to get some attention
I do get attention, but not the one I was hoping for
I walk away and give up
Tears stream my face
Someone comes up to me and wipes the tears off my face
He gives me a wide smile and I too, give him one

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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Simple to the point and its real and relatable. Nice


Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Wonderful message in this poem. It's amazing how powerful a smile can be. This really brought tears to my eyes. Outstanding job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) It's really appreciated!!! :)
Relatable and an interesting write.A smile is communicable and spreads happiness all around. But, it shouldn't be just a mask;it should come from within.
Well written! It's not easy to express so intensely what you feel about.
Kudos!


Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It's really appreciated! :)
I agree with you
Simple and brilliant. Quite abstract and that's the hero for me in this. Beautifully depicted the transition of hopes and the realisations. Speaks to everyone in it's own way. Very relatable but still very different. Thanks for this piece. Keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It's really appreciated!
Amazing what a smile can do, a kind word or an act of love. All these things can change someone's entire life. I try never to pass someone without any acknowledgment. You'd be surprised by how many people do not know how to react to this. I also like this piece because my wife is a teacher and her name is Mrs. Smith, lol.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Lol :D Thank you so much! :) Really appreciated :)
Deep meaning. Really nice message through the poem . Great write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you!!
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Bullying
a problem that still exists in schools
Seems Canada has sorted it out
pink shirt day - anti bullying


Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Yep :) Thank you for reviewing! :)
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Start is not realy so happy. Very bitter words , ugly experience. But that happy twist on the end is so beautiful. There was someone who smiling on you. That s very nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) I really appreciate it
We all need that person who makes us smile, yet do we think of being that person to others?
I liked the storytelling theme in this one. The last lines sum up the whole poem nicely :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :))
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊
Oh I remember it well! It is so hard being young! So many emotions attacking you .. and classmats too, and teachers not understanding .. then the tears of dseperation! It does get easier as you grow older. But I thought your poem was very vividly depicted and very moving. I was there with you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) I totally agree

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Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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