Can I have you back? (Poem)

My mind always thinks about you

The beautiful days I’ve spent with you

Especially cuddling into your arms

My mind always thinks about you

When I exchanged rings with you

The time when I was most happy having your back

Just one request, can I have you back?

Just one more chance, to fill in the gap that our relationship lacks?

Please… can I have you back?

Reviews

[Tina H.W.]

Oh...your poem is so touching, Mr. Writer. My heart melted with the line: "Just one request, can I have you back?" And "Please....can I have you back?" It just seemed so sincere. Sweet and very heart-felt. Beautiful. I loved it :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Tina!! :)

[Tina H.W.]

It's my pleasure! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

It is so hard to accept the fact to lose someone. This is truly beautifully written with true emotions.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :) It indeed is so hard to lose someone dear

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...You're welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Really good work this is, shaan I really like this one, one of your best

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Mr.Writer]

I tried :)

[heartspeaks]

Another good work...it didn't sound very painful though ., cause the emotion is strong but there is something lacking to connect. Add CAN I PLEASE HAVE YOU BACK in the last. overall it was a good read. Thanks for sharing. All the best.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much :)

[K.L. Ravns]

In my opinion I would have ended with the title phrase. Keep writing,

Raven

[Mr.Writer]

I know I should have done that :( :D Thanks for reviewing! :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Looking back...Rush of emotion...Wondering if you should move forward to the great unknown or risk the backward glance turning into a pillar of salt!
Thank you for sharing.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Zenovia]

A second chance few lucky ones gets the same....your request seems deep from heart !

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you!! :)