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A Poem by Mr.Writer

Creek, creek                         Dreadful dark destruction

I was home alone                  Expiration exit out of ife

I jumped out of bed,            Afterlife abide         

What was that?                      Time to sleep in your tomb             

Tick, tick,                      Hardest and hated time of someone's life

That got me by surprise

Oh, it was just a clock

I headed back to sleep       Bees

Beep, beep                       The bees buzzed and flied

I knew what that was,      Chasing children for their food

I wasn’t scared,                 Don’t move, just stand still.

For it was just the phone                              

Drip, drip                              Burnt beef

That must have been the tap             Becca Bonner baked a burnt beef

Creek, creek     So she couldn’t do anything other but to grief

Oh no, it came back                                Becca Bonner took a brief break

But what was that?                     But eventually gave up because she had a stomach

For I was home alone

© 2016 Mr.Writer


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Taz
I personaly love writing poems because they just come naturally to me, these are very well done poems.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked Burnt beef! Creek creek was so funny :p


Posted 7 Years Ago


Love the poetry:) well written and interesting!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked the poem you wrote on death. Well done ☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow the death one is just beautiful... creek, creek is very playful with a touch of comedy but don't understand the beef one...

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like all the poems, however the format took me a minute to digest. I wasn't sure if they were all supposed to be read together or connected in some way. I see now that they aren't. I like the creek creek one the best :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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