Blue eyes

Girl meets guy, girl falls for guy, guy too oblivious to notice

He had striking blue eyes and a hint of a smile
I caught a glimpse of him as I passed by
I felt my heart flutter for the first time
I stopped in my tracks to gather my mind

I turned to see blue eyes staring into mine
His voice was like music and rhymes
The melody flowed so perfectly
We were an orchestra in a symphony

His hand slightly brushed against me
I couldn't move I couldn't speak
Blood rushed from my head to my feet
He made me feel so weak

Dark hair, beautiful eyes
He's just my type of guy
Frozen statuesque in front of a God
I could've cried when he waved goodbye

Reviews

[Missy]

Thank you so much. I tried to get that feeling it took me awhile.

[Mary]

like the rhythm and the brief "could have been romantic if only..." nature of the poem! Like the author's note.