Circle of Love

The image I can’t erase

Nor would I want to in any case

It reminds me that life is short

It reminds me to fill my heart

Enjoy every moment from the start

Cause death will come and we will part

The image of death haunts me so

They say just don’t look

How can I not

That just how it goes

It’s the last time to say goodbye

And cry the most hurtful cry

Hold close the ones that you love

Hold dear to them without fear

When the time come

And they have gone away

Think of them most every day

They may be gone

But not forever

We will see them again

When our time comes to an end

They will wait for us

In heaven above

Inside the great gate

We call the circle of love.

Reviews

[Heavenswriter]

I like this poem the words are amazing idea for poem circle of love the title

[Diane]

Thank you for the review.

[Chris]

Tis the season to remember ...again.

[Diane]

Yes sir. Thank you for reading.

[Nerio]

It could seems as a mad thing to plunge deeply into pain, to watch with wide staring eyes Lady Death who smiles at us, with her grinning awfull teeth. It could seem even more absurd, to do that in order to be happy, to feel alive and enjoy what is there of good in this life. But it is exaclty so and you make it clear to everyone with your brave verses. You rise your eyes toward the great Void and measure life as a joyful and blissful walk untill that point. And you underline the idea with haunting rhymes, stating that exactly because of that abyss, life is even brighter and worth fighting. Brave, indeed. Existentialism at its finest concept, but with pleasantly poetic verses. You won my feelings :)

[Diane]

Okay the review you posted for my poem is better than the actual poem. LOL you should probably make that a new entry. And thank you for the review.

[Nerio]

LOL. Well, you put your soul in it ;)
And people can read it and it's great.
To next poem ;)

[Diane]

Thank you again

[Jimmy Yetts]

Heartfelt and heartwarming.
Yes, we will see them, again--and won't it be glorious? The best people are, after all, on the other side.
An uplifting read, Diane!

[Diane]

Well, thank to so much for the sweet review.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

The circle of love is never ending, they are always with you.

[Diane]

Not sure where these cone from. Its way to simple. I am starting to think they are being whispered to me.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I never plan out anything I write, it just happens. If I think about it I can't write a thing.